Random jottings

Anybody care to critique that last post? It started out as a genuine prayer, but settled into an almost poetic style straight away. Part of me wanted to make it work as a poem before I published it, but I decided it was more appropriate to leave it as I prayed it. Maybe some poet/bloggers will tell me how well (or, probably, otherwise) it works as a poem as it is.

That was the first time writing has really distracted me from what might otherwise have been time trawling the net for porn. I felt the first hint of temptation, but instead of giving in I prayed, by typing my prayer into the blog. Unorthodox, maybe, but I can’t be the only person who thinks best with the written word (although I may possibly be the only one who prays best that way...)